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If Wishes Were Horses...

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4.5 Out of 5 Stars
If wishes were horses… starts as Neil Marshal walked out of
his disastrous marriage and goes to a friend’s looking for a place to stay
until he can get a place of his own. The beginning, while well written, is a
bit slow. However, it puts everything into place to flesh out the whole story.
Like any good mystery this book has a slew of characters/ suspects. It took a
bit of sorting out on who was who, but Tim Hemlin gives them their own
characteristics and personality that helps you get a full picture of who each
person is relatively quickly.
While reading I noticed that all of my favourite mystery writers
are women. So it was quite different and refreshing to reading a man’s perspective
actually written by a man. I also found a new appreciation for all our modern technology!
Overall I enjoyed this book and look forward to reading his
next book.
The Whisper of Rage starts off with a bang, literally. It gets
you hooked immediately then starts filling in with new characters and necessary
background information. I liked the new characters and think it would be
totally possible to have a whole series using the PI as the main character.
Maybe there already is, I will have to look into this.
Tim Hemlin’s writing is smoother in this book. He also does
well keeping the characters who continued on from the last book with their same
personalities. However, Neil feels less broken
in this book. In the last book he felt like he was almost being acted upon whereas
this book it feels like he is making his own choices. It works really well to
develop his character and show his growth as a person. I enjoy when a character
can develop throughout a series and this is done very subtly.
There is mild language and a bit of sex behind the sceans but
on a whole it is quite clean. I would recommend this series to anyone who
enjoys a good Murder Mystery.
Snippets:
If wishes were horses…
Nothing in my twenty-eight years could’ve
prepared me for the scream that awaited me inside. Bloodcurdling, the howl
lifted every hair on my neck to attention, siphoned ten years off my life, and
threatened to claim my first child before I’d even found someone to conceive
him with. Fajitas hit the floor, fists shot up, and instinctively I crouched,
looking for the source of Satan’s cry. ~ Neil Marshall
The Whisper of Rage
I
did the only thing I could think of: I ran after him myself. Questions came to
me. Why weren’t there any uniformed cops here as backup? Did those two old men
leaden with fat and iron think the capture was going to be this easy?
I
knew the area and took off down Service Street, hooked a right at the
cash-and-carry place. Linda had taken the direct path, but for a big guy
Ramirez was fast, too fast for her to come close.
I
expected to hear gunshots. There were none. All of them were out of sight. I
was running parallel to Airline Drive, thinking that old José would duck into
one of the neighborhoods, when I asked myself what I was going to do if I did
catch up to him. I was fast, had great stamina, and was totally unarmed. Great,
I thought, and slowed. I pictured the headlines: IDIOT JOGGER SLAIN WHILE
CHASING EX-CON—OUTRAN COPS AND INVESTIGATORS TO BE THERE FIRST—NEVER SUSPECTED
PROTECTION WAS AN ISSUE. The son of a bitch tried to kill me once. What better
to do than give him a second chance? –Neil Marshall
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